Where you state that Central Asia is apparently, the homeland of International Law thanks to works of formidable scholar Muhammad ibn Ahmad Sarakhsi, consider removing apparently as it risks undermining the well-established prominence of Sarakhsis scholarship from the region. Otherwise, the content remains lucid in conveying Sarakhsis manifold contributions across jurisprudential domains. Particularly insightful is the comparison drawn between his analyses and those of Western luminaries like Grotius. In closing, I applaud your dedication to illuminating Sarakhsis enduring legacy. Please feel free to submit any other texts for a final review of grammar, style and flow. It remains an honor to ensure your thoughtful writings are conveyed with precision and elegance.